L.G: Describe a moment in time through the eyes of an ANZAC soldier.
S.O.S: - I have described the senses the soldier would feel.
- I have painted a picture in the readers head.
THE WAR
Did that
hard bullet just graze my head? I am so scared. I am sick. We finally got to
Gallipoli in Turkey. It was April 25th 1915. We were fighting for
Russian land. We were also fighting for the British. Before I could blink, bam,
he blows up the big barrier. I could hear the machine gun firing at me. Oh, I’m
shot! I’m shot! I could see the blood dribbling down my leg. I could smell the
smoke hovering though my body and I could feel another ANZAC right beside me on
the ground. I could taste the dirt that I had swallowed. I got back up with the
guy on my back and I started climbing and I got to the top. I ran 15 metres. We
were all getting shot on the way to the protecting barrier. My heart was
beating. It felt like my heart was going to come out of my chest. There are
people all around me. There is blood all over my boots. Weeks and weeks of
fighting and finally I come back to my sad family. Written by
Jake White