Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Amy - Report

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The Elewhelerabibellpus
The Elewhelerabibellpus is the weirdest animal on earth. Today I’m in terror talking to you about the Elewhelerabibellpus.

The Elewhelerabibellpus needs to live in a very hot climate because if they’re in a freezing cold climate they will die. They live in the hot sea in Fiji. They absolutely love to swim fast so they can catch their prey.

The Elewhelerabibellpus has long squid like legs. These long legs are used for hunting prey. They also have a spout for going under water. As if you can’t forget about the Elephant trunk. The Elewhelerabibellpus has rabbit ears that they use for hearing so they don’t get chomped by whales and sharks.

The Elewhelerabibellpus eats starfish, rocks and sand. They can’t eat much because the weight of their body weighs too much, so they have to drag their big fat tummy around under water. Their predators are sharks and whales. They watch out for these animals.

This magnificent animal is the most interesting animal on earth.

By Amy Vickers

Molly - Skogke

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Skogke
Yum, yum, yum in my tum. I like chewing berries and flies. The Skogke lives in the woods to find berries on trees. The Skogke is an animal that is part frog, part skunk and part snake.

The Skogke lives in Tasman in the woods so it can find berries on trees. They have to be there because Tasman is the only place with berries on trees.


The Skogke is 1.44 metres so they can reach berries off trees. A Skogke has snakes as arms so it can catch flies. It has a skunk body to jump onto other Skogkes. It has a frog head to see their predators very well. It plays in the bushes with other Skogkes so it has lots of scars. It also loves to wear accessories like top hats and sunglasses.

Scratch, scratch, scratch goes the Skogke with his friends. All the Skogke does is eat, sleep and play with it’s boring old friends.The Skogke eats berries and flies.

The Skogke is a fantastic animal that you can see. So if you go to Tasman, you might see the greatest animal in existence!

By Molly Gernhoefer