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- Adjectives are relevant to the topic
The Elewhelerabibellpus
The Elewhelerabibellpus is the weirdest animal on earth. Today I’m in terror talking to you about the Elewhelerabibellpus.
The Elewhelerabibellpus needs to live in a very hot climate because if they’re in a freezing cold climate they will die. They live in the hot sea in Fiji. They absolutely love to swim fast so they can catch their prey.
The Elewhelerabibellpus has long squid like legs. These long legs are used for hunting prey. They also have a spout for going under water. As if you can’t forget about the Elephant trunk. The Elewhelerabibellpus has rabbit ears that they use for hearing so they don’t get chomped by whales and sharks.
The Elewhelerabibellpus eats starfish, rocks and sand. They can’t eat much because the weight of their body weighs too much, so they have to drag their big fat tummy around under water. Their predators are sharks and whales. They watch out for these animals.
This magnificent animal is the most interesting animal on earth.
By Amy Vickers
I like the new specie you made.
ReplyDeleteVery good language species,interesting and all of that other words
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