Room 20 did some writing about a "slice" of our weekend. We had to describe something we had done without actually saying what it was. Here is Keith's writing:
Whish, whish, whish. I could hear flaxes wacking together. I could feel my heart pounding. I felt like it was going to go forever. My legs felt like they would fall off. I felt like I was lost. My legs were full of prickles. My heart drooped when I realised I was only half way. When we reached the end, my face lit up!
By Keith Patterson
(Keith's Mum took him on a 5 hour walk in the weekend!)
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