Cooper

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Silly Pigs

Have you heard the three little pigs? Well suddenly, I’ve just discovered a different side to the story. It’s actually the pigs fault! The wolf just knocked on the door innocently, grannies are precious and the wolf's got a cold. Be nice to the poor wolf.

Firstly, the wolf just knocked on the door. It’s hardly fair to not give someone sugar. Would you feel like no one likes you? Would you not like it if you kindly ask for some sugar and you don’t get any?

Secondly, the pigs were rude enough not to say come in! (He was just getting sugar for his granny) It’s her birthday. Your grannies are really precious to you.

Thirdly, if you didn’t get any sugar for your granny you would look like an old clown. Why does everyone have to blame the friendly wolf? He’s got a cold. Be nice to him because it’s not hard to be nice. Even saying hello is nice. Who would build a house out of straw? That’s just pathetic!

So I’ve just stated my part of the story. The wolf just knocked on the door. The pigs we’re rude enough not to open the door and you’d look like clown if you couldn’t help your Grandma. Thats why you should help the wolf get free of this blame.

By Cooper Patterson

Mason

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Fantastic Mr Fox

Mr Dombroski, the three awful farmers are certainly  in the wrong because how would the fox eat? Why should boggis, bunce and bean kill Mr fox? And the three farmers can go down to the shop to buy their meat.

Firstly the fox must eat food like us.How would you feel if you didn’t get food for a long time?

Secondly Boggis, Bunce and Bean still should not dig up Mr and Mrs Foxes house. Why should Boggis, Bunce and Bean kill fantastic Mr Fox killing his chickens?

Finally, their chickens will die any way. The awful farmers are already full on food. They always eat food like disgusting meat!! They can just go down to New World or Countdown to get meat.

Written  by Mason Gadsby                             

Jordan

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Fantastic Mr Fox

Have you heard of the Fantastic Mr Fox? The fox is a thief. He stole Boggis, Bunce and Beans food.

Firstly, the fox is in the wrong because he stole the farmers food. So thats taking away a lot of money. How would you like it if you had no money to get food to survive?

Secondly, the farmers should kill the fox because that’s taking away something really good from the farmers. No one said that killing animals is illegal. So would you kill the fox to get food to survive?

Lastly, I think that the farmers would get really angry over the fox stealing their food. Why would you just go over there and steal their food?  I wouldn’t. Would you?

I think this story is a lie. The Fantastic Mr fox isn’t so fantastic at all. The fox is absolutely outrageous for stealing all the farmers food.

Written by Jordan Petrie

Room 20

Molly

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It’s Only Sugar

In the story the three little pigs, the big bad wolf isn’t actually the bad guy. The three little pigs are, and i’m going to tell you why.

Firstly, the extremely trustworthy wolf accidentally blew their house down because he had a cold. He was just sneezing so much! Could you control your cold?

Secondly, all the magnificent wolf wanted was some sugar for his poor old Grandmas birthday cake. If the annoying pigs just opened the door there wouldn’t be a problem! I say that the pigs are tremendously rude.

Finally, who would make a house out of straw? That is ridiculous! Do you think thats a bit suspicious because wouldn’t they know that it is going to fall down? Would you make a house out of straw or sticks? I know you wouldn’t.

So I've just told you that the big bad wolf is not actually that bad, the three little pigs are the bad guy’s! As already stated the wolf accidentally blew their house down because he had a sneezing cold. All the wolf wanted was some sugar for his poor old grandmas birthday cake and who would make a house out of straw?

Written by Molly Gernhoefer

Room 20

Fantastic Mr Fox

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FANTASTIC MR FOX

Mr Dombroski, I officially and positively believe that the foxes are in the wrong because he’s stealing, making the farmers ANGRIER and it’s not illegal to kill animals!!

Firstly, the foxes are in the wrong because it's not illegal to KILL Animals!!!!! How would you feel if you didn’t get any meat? Well meat might not be important to you but I think it’s healthy for me!!!

Secondly, he’s dumb to go steal their chickens, turkeys, geese and other types of food! If the three farmers see him, it will make them more ANGRY, FEISTY and be even more HARSH on the foxes!!!!!!

Lastly, it’s going to make the farmers wait, wait, wait and wait and if the FOXES are down there too long.The farmers will get sick and tired of waiting and then maybe go down the gigantic hole and find the FOXES. Then the foxes will get shot and die in the gigantic HOLE!!!!!! Don’t you think they should get killed because they’re stealing their money basically??!!

As already stated, the FOXES are in the wrong because there stealing meat, food and stuff which will make the farmers HARSH on the FOXES and the farmers will just go down the GIGANTIC HOLE and the foxes will get shot!!

By Zeta Barber

Room 20