Purpose: Explain how crystals grow.
L.G.: Use correct sentences by including capital letters and full stops.
CRYSTALS
Today I am going to explain to you about the biggest crystals in the world.These crystals are under ground in mexico. It is 300 meters deep and the crystals are as high as a three story building. They started the size of a grain of salt and now they weigh 500 tonnes. They are formed with hot mineral water which helps them grow. These crystals are fantastic. If I was there, I would explode! I've just explained how the biggest crystals in the world grow.
Written by Sarah Johnson
I like how you have used capital letters and full stops
ReplyDeleteI like how you have explained how crystals grow
What you could use more punctuation
From mason gadsby Room20
I like how you have used correct sentences
ReplyDeleteI like how you explained how ice crystals grow
What you could use more WOW WORDS
From Mason Gadsby Room20
Sarah. I like how you said how the crystals grow
ReplyDeleteI also like how you said what the crystals grow with
maybe next time you could add more detail
By Addison and Room20
You have met your L.G.
ReplyDeleteI love your hook in.
Next time you could add a bit more detail.
From Amy Vickers Room20