Purpose: Explain Minecraft and what you do in the game.
L.G.: Use correct sentences by have full stops and capital letters
World of Minecraft
Do you know what minecraft is? If you don't, today is the day you get to know some facts about it. Minecraft has survival mode and creative mode. In Minecraft, you can cut down trees with an axe and use TNT dynamite to blow stuff up. You can also sheer sheep to get the fur off. The fur is great for helping make houses stronger. Now you know all about Minecraft.
Written by Liam Martin
like how you have explained minecraft
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used correct sentences
Next time try to explain how it starts
From mason gadsby
Hi Liam
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you put detail in your story like minecraft has survival mode and creative mode.
I like that you are describing about minecraft
Next time you could write what you play minecraft on.
From Rose
You have used correct sentences.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said ''Do you know what Minecraft is?''
You could tell me how the game starts.
From Amy Room 20
I think your capital letters and full stops are great.
ReplyDeleteI think you done well to talk about the wool
Next step talk about some other stuff From Cooper
I like your story you have used correct sentences buy using full stops and capital letters. You need to add more description so I can learn more about minecraft.
ReplyDeleteFrom Justin and Dylan.
Room 7
I like how your not only used one full stop and capital letters
ReplyDeleteall your words are spelt right
next time use more wow words
from ben
I like how your not only used one full stop and capital letters
ReplyDeleteall your words are spelt right
next time use more wow words
from ben
you've talked to the audience
ReplyDeleteyou've got full stops and captil letters in the right spots
next time you could detail to make it more exciting
from AWESOME ZETA!!!!!!!
you have done your full stops and cappital letters rearly good
ReplyDeleteyou told me all about the wool witch is good
next step is to tell your audience how it starts
from vili room 20
I like how you have put your full stops.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used capital letters.
Next time you could add a bit more to your story.
From Hannah Watkins Room20
awesome job Liam on making correct sentences.And using full stops and capital letters.next time you can write more. from Ethan.
ReplyDeleteawesome job liam on using correct sentences. and having full stops and capital letters . Next time you can write a bit more. from ethan
ReplyDeleteyou should explain minecraft better next time
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